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Title: When the Pain is Winning
Author: Pamela Crouse
Date Submitted: 11/16/2013

 
Poem: As gentle waves of peace wash tears away
The wind caresses gently ‘gainst my soul.
My anguished sorrow blends with dawn of day
As gentle waves of peace wash tears away.
‘Tis hope I cling to through the clouds of grey
As strength to rise again becomes my goal.
As gentle waves of peace wash tears away
The wind caresses gently ‘gainst my soul.

Too soon my heart slips into dark of night
Surrounded by the pain from mem’ries past
It robs my strength and steals away my sight
Too soon my heart slips into dark of night
Crushed -- blinded now, I fall from heaven’s light
E’en though I fight to live ~ I fear can’t last
Too soon my heart slips into dark of night
Surrounded by the pain from mem’ries past.

(A Triolet is an eight line poem where the first line is repeated for line four and the first two lines are repeated as a refrain for lines seven and eight.
Triolet Rhyme Scheme: A B a A a b A B -- I wrote this using ambic pentameter.)...